P.S. Look in my scraps please! There are things in there I would like critique on, but they aren't good enough for my gallery. Thank you!


No EscapeYou start to run You try to fly Yet day by day You slowly die.No Escape
You look for ways To change your fate To slow it down Or take it out.
It trails behind Stalks the way Watching, waiting For the day
It makes you die It makes you fly
And when that day comes It stares you in the face Its cold glare paralyzes you As it sinks its teeth into your soul.
And in your soul It finds the answer The answer to why Why your heart is black And your soul is gray.
You try to run Y
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I like your poetry, you've got some pretty nice stuff there.
And by the way, metal rockssss.
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"Do you know what time it is? It's two thirty in the afternoon and I'm trying to sleep!"
"Death defines life, delirium defines sanity, destruction defines creation, dream defines reality, destiny defines will, despair defines hope, desire defines apath
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"Do you know what time it is? It's two thirty in the afternoon and I'm trying to sleep!"
"Death defines life, delirium defines sanity, destruction defines creation, dream defines reality, destiny defines will, despair defines hope, desire defines apath
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"Live without your sunlight.
Love without your heartbeat."
"There's such a fooled heart
Beatin' so fast
In search of new dreams.
A love that will last
Within your heart.
I'll place the moon
Within your heart."
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